All Comments on 'Pixie Magic Ch. 14'

Excellent conclusion to the story, congratulations!

Awesome!

great story 5 stars

Sorry to see it end. Well done.

I absolutely loved this story. It would be so fun to see a spin-off of the kids as they've grown up and where life takes them. Please please keep writing you're amazing!

Good story overall, I’m not sure it needed to be as grim in places, which for me spoiled the effect of the rest of the story. The one plot omission I noticed was about the Stag/Pixie King that transferred his lineage powers onto Sky, given that he was visiting by prior arrangement from another forest, that means there’s another Pixie tribe/family/state somewhere nearby that’s now short of their King and would have come looking for him. Maybe I’ve misread the story, but it definitely seems like a loose end, possibly to be dealt with in another related story.

Many thanks for both writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Very enjoyable story . from start to finish .

Lovely story, thanks for sharing it with the world.