by Merritt89
Would love to see some nipple play in the next chapter; I bet those pierced titties are just begging to be handled roughly.
I made the mistake of not reading your biography first - I believed the writer was female, and so felt cheated when I realised you were perhaps going to do a series from the client's point of view.
I don't read stories by males on principle, even though I'm male myself, as they are usually very self-centred, so wish you had made it clearer.
Other than that, not too bad.
Great plot,good setting, great internal dialogue, nice lead in. fabulous conclusion leading to the rest of the story
There will be more :D have not had much time recently, but rest assured
, there will be more. Part 2 of this story and many more other stories