All Comments on 'Pizza Guy got Me Trippin'

by Merritt89

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice Tease

Panting for a continuation.

IAmJohnGalt1IAmJohnGalt1about 6 years ago
More!

Would love to see some nipple play in the next chapter; I bet those pierced titties are just begging to be handled roughly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Subtle not suddle

Keep going, but please check your spelling

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Gah!

More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I feel cheated

I made the mistake of not reading your biography first - I believed the writer was female, and so felt cheated when I realised you were perhaps going to do a series from the client's point of view.

I don't read stories by males on principle, even though I'm male myself, as they are usually very self-centred, so wish you had made it clearer.

Other than that, not too bad.

mitchawamitchawaabout 6 years ago
Plot

Great plot,good setting, great internal dialogue, nice lead in. fabulous conclusion leading to the rest of the story

Merritt89Merritt89about 6 years agoAuthor

There will be more :D have not had much time recently, but rest assured

, there will be more. Part 2 of this story and many more other stories

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