by Thomas Drablézien
I came to your story because it was listed as one of a few in the genre of "double life", as my most recent story is. And I have so thoroughly enjoyed it. It's quite a powerful tale with, happily, an ending we can all live with. I say "Go, Jane!", and wish you well in your work!
why didn't you make this a love story? maybe plain jane deserves love to. so you made it a tragedy? you HAVE NO HEART ASSHOLE!
Hi Tom
Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story. As in real life, all is not plain sailing, not every story has a happy ending.
Sometimes bad shit happens.
Nice to have a story about the consequences.
Liked the ending.
From one of the countless abused persons. Not for the redemption but for validating one’s deep mistrust of everybody and the desire to be invisible