by Cromagnonman
I like the story. I would have read it anyway if it were in the "Non-Erotic" category.
Saw the end coming. Pretty ok story. Shouldn't be categorized as 'mind control.'
there is nothing here that really matters to the man, he got bit a little, he got on Utube, where is the revenge, a girl died
Cromagnonman story was confusing . You are totally lost about you-tube.
This reads like part Of a longer story.
Wow pretty bad for a writer with this much talent.
Maybe this is an early creation he tossed up. Even the cata....forgetaboutit .
A Merry Man