All Comments on 'Planning Ahead'

Great story. 5stars

I liked this - 5 stars worth - and in an odd way it strikes home in way... enough said on that.

Nicely done... character development and three love stories in a very brief tale.

A barely okay story that doesn't fit in the loving wives section. A Hallmark movie script.

So she was ten years older than him and overweight?

Damn, he really was screwed up after his first wife died.

Truly eye roll worthy

As I understand it, the idea of group sex, and even on the first date, belonged to Michelle, and she told her husband that Eric had come up with it? Well done, slut! Between husbands, you need to try as much debauchery as possible. Otherwise, when Eric falls in love, he will immediately begin to be greedy and jealous. So she would have lived like a fool, jumping from Charles's penis to Eric's penis, without intermediate connections.

This was actually a really beautiful and sad story. Good work

well written.

A bit dark yet filled with meaning thought.

So he wants to leave his wife with a good man and he looks for that guy in a pick up bar and selects a guy who has no issues in dating married women? And his selection for a new wife is a woman who is married and cheats on her husband? I mean at the time he was not aware of the deal made by her husband. But then again, she was out screwing guys. Sicko.

Loved it. Brought tears to my eyes. 5 stars. Thank you.

"Charles had left Michelle millions of dollars so our new family would never want for anything. "

Oh, that always helps.

The MC married a woman a decade older than himself who he knew from personal experience loves to act out submissive slut fantasies with other men and women. Why in the world is he seeking to suffer more and to expose his children to more pain? WTF is the matter with his mother? Could she not see a problem here? Or is Michelle's (thanks for the Benjamins, Charlie) money the real draw here?

While his wife was alive during the first few chapters, this was a truly lovely story. Our mc was deserving and worthy of sympathy. Even when mom tells him to go out and fuck someone he's cool. 6 months later he's a total lowlife piece of shit willingly participating in adultery with no concern for potential harm to marriages. His seconwife is a selfish, disrespectful bitch who's going to be looking for better dick soon.

Very sad story, well written good nice ending. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Good read 5 *. This one hit home a bit. I lost my wife of thirty five years to cancer.

I dislike stories glorifying asshole spouses who prefer grieving to taking care of their families. Story is alos unbelievable and thus lacking interest.

Solid feel good story! 5*

You got most of the way there. Sweet story.

Keep at it.

Hooked

Different take on romantic situation. Story told well. I for one do not like background that goes back to the 5 th grade picnic…. Probably the recruiter in me. Thanks for sharing.

Three love stories, combined into one. And his Mom was funny.

Beautiful. I like it a lot.

Yep, I'm pretty much in awe, that kind of altruism is extremely rare in real life. And as rare as it is, the fact that you could imagine it and set it to writing, competently, is truly a gift. Praise to you indeed!

Unfortunately, my experience has taught me differently. I wish you the best!

Malachi Stygian

Sad, but lovely love story. 5*

Ed

So tired of almost every story starting out at or, at some point, taking place in a bar. Can't someone come up with a more unique place to meet someone? And don't mention a church either! Or school/college. 1*

This story had a great plot line, but it really wasn’t executed very well. It read more like a report than a story. Still a solid 3*

Started out okay, then just sickening.

Well written. I really liked the content of your story. I lost my wife many years ago, but my grief held my back from moving on and finding a new relationship. This is definitely a five story.

Your protagonist's character is disgusting to me. He fucks women, married or not! Would be interesting how he would react if that happened if he were still married and the same thing happens to his wife?

Your story is really remarkably well told. Even if I don't like your protagonist! Nevertheless 5*!

Nice, different story.

Wow that was different. Thanks.

Very well writen and unique story of love and companionship. Thanks!

I don't normally enjoy themes like this. Regardless, this was so well written, short and to the point, that I had to give it 5 🌟. Well done.

Hood story but me personally would not seek a new relationship ever again . It’s not in me . Many do and I understand somewhat but to fall in love all over agsin not for me . Kinda hard to know the wife most likely will move on and be in love with another man . I guess could be described as sad but also happy depending on your personality

My wife passed a year ago. This emotions are different than any other figure in your life passing. It's a more profound sense of loss than parents being gone. This story did a god job of telling the story in my humble opinion.

He could have tried to save marriages before screwing the wife, ya know? Not a very sympathetic character.

Just because Cuck, I mean Chuck, enjoys sloppy seconds doesn’t mean that any of those other husbands would have been as appreciative of Eric’s interventions in their relationships.

The pacing felt a little... Off. His wife passed so he turned into a douchebag, kinda rough but understandable, but then he falls in love with another woman in 4 days, one that he spends very very little time actually talking to, then forces himself on the dying husband just cause?

Decent premise, but wildly uncomfortable with how unlikeable and unsympathetic the main character became.

I am emotionally confused, that was one of if not the most beautifully caring, loving wife story I have read. I don't understand the people throwing shade at your protagonist he is broken not an ass those who don't see that perhaps has not enough pain in their lives to relate, for their sake I hope they never do.

You took a sad, tragic situation and turned it into just a common cheating story.

I liked this, both deviant , sad , and caring a story, nicely thought out and written

That worked really well. Romantic.

Charles had quite the interesting way of dealing with his mortality. My guess is that he set the one-month limit to (a) allow deep . Knowing Michelle would be loved and cared-for allowed him to die with untroubled mind, knowing he’d done all he could for his wife. Until his mother sent him to get laid, Eric seemed the kind of man who’d feel a good deal of guilt after bedding a married woman (unless she was a confirmed hotwife).

Charles had quite the interesting way of dealing with his mortality. My guess is that he set the one-month limit to (a) allow them to form deeper feelings, and (b) weed-out anybody who’s only there for sex. He was able to die knowing he’d done all he could for his wife. Before his mother sent him to get laid, Eric seemed the kind of man who’d feel a good deal of guilt from being involved in a woman’s cheating. It really isn’t clear how he made the leap to lothario.

A most unusual Romance, but definitely a must read.

Park you prejudices etc. and just enjoy an excellent read.

THC

Sometimes the previous comments say it all. I concur with all previous comments. God I love Literotica....5 🌟