All Comments on 'Playa Dust in the Bedouin'

Hot damn that was a great story!!!

Absolutely priceless! As for your observations regarding Burning Man, and considering your disclaimer that you have never attended, you were pretty much spot on. As for your reflections on combat, unfortunately they brought up some painful memories that I thought I'd managed to bury. The sex not withstanding, this brilliant piece of prose is most definitely a keeper...

Just re-read this story and felt compelled to post this additional comment.

This may be the only Literotica story I actually read for the story itself, with the sex being more-or-less incidental . . . .

I just read this in March a couple days after securing tickets for my 5th burn. I’m also a veteran, and coincidentally the handy-guy in our camp. I can’t believe how closely you nailed most of the culture & magic of BRC. I cannot wait to go home. Superb story, thank you.

Very rarely does a story get me past the point of welling up - but in this case, tears spilled over, and ran down my cheeks. Semper Fi.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read from any source much less on Literotica.

Makes me want to go to Burning Man

The absolute best story I have read on this site to date.

This was lovely. It felt like I'd actually been to Burning Man and by god, it was just as hot as the desert.

I like everything about the story except for including others into the sex between the siblings. It always ruins it for me

So good!

I actually got into the characters and the story line more than the sex. It was a great story.