All Comments on 'Playgirl's Obsession Ch. 01'

Good start!

Waiting for more

It’s a change, it’s better then the last stories, but still not good. Lizzie is an asshole and Carter is a coward, but compared to the last story, it’s better.

Note that you forgot the author’s note.

-Dillon

Great story. Looking forward to many more chapters. 5stars

Dude add some variety to the stories there’ll all the same, your kinks are fine, but come up with a new way to write them and come up with a new way to write characters they’re almost all the same. Like have a boy fall in love with his teacher or his professor who’s a dominatrix.

Have you read all of my stories? Because they are very different. Some of them are massive sluts while others have slept with only one guy before getting with the male protagonist, and a few were complete virgins. The methods they use are also vastly difference. A few of them are only manipulative while others resort to blackmail, with the worst ones actually using rape. I'd say there is a lot of difference in there.

That's not the first or last time someone's said all the stories and characters are the same, because it's true. There's no variety. It's the same garbage being written over and over again.