by MINKX
I loved it. The story was funny and entertaining and the character's perverted side makes me think of my pervy side. XD
I can't wait to see what happens nect. :D
I thought this was a really good story but where's the rest of it you can't stop there. So far you've wrote just enough to tease us. Please finish it.
This was a good first chapter. Seems like you put a lot of thought into setting the plot... so we are just waiting for the next chapters.... get with it!!
Very thoughtful and entertaining...love the dialogue. So far, it's not a typical story or character...please continue! I'd like to read more and see what happens.
Great story. Very creative and just wish the author would continue it.
Wow, I really liked what you've got, but I want to know if you plan on making more? I know that it inspired me enough to want to write something like this... but I'd prefer to read what you've written instead of doing all the hard work lol
Please continue to write! This is such an intriguing start! I would love to see more of this!! I'm addicted to your writing style!