All Comments on 'Please Breed Me?'

Good premise.

But sex is too mechanical. Too automatic. No foreplay. Just BOOM, cock in mouth.

Two stars.

Very hot

I can see what you wanted and tried to do there, with the two of them having such a deep and caring love scene, but it didn't get deep and caring enough. It was like "is this what you want? Then here ya go, have fun." Then the guy just fucked her. She didn't get much out of it. Good luck with it.

Such an amazing story. I can really feel the connection you were going for between both characters. The doubt is such a human submissive characteristic as well and you emphasised it so well.

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