All Comments on 'Please Breed Me'

BRAVO!

Wonderfully written. You young lady are a true talent!

You checked all my boxes with this. Thank you.

Honestly this is a properly beautiful bit of writing- much higher quality than one would expect based on the content. There's a superb use of allusion and parallel rhetoric to religious and epistemological imagery/diction, in addition to the invoking of animalistic and primal instinct as a writing device. If you're not pursuing an english/writing/literature degree, you really should consider it.

I don't know to whom in the universe you're referring, but this is certainly is NOT my God. I believe you've been deeply deceived by an Angel of Light (i.e., Satan himself). I pray that you receive mercy on Judgement Day, because you'll certainly need it. I suggest you repent and reflect on just how comfortable you'd be spending eternity in flames before playing with fire.

"Warning from a Christian", are you really admonishing a woman about sin when you're obviously wallowing in it yourself, hanging around a naughty stories site? Cast the beam out of your own eye before you go casting the motes out of others. Also, while conflating God and a husband is perhaps taking things a *bit* too far, it's written that a wife should revere her husband; "For the husband is the head of the wife as Christ is the head of the church, his body, and is himself its Savior". (Ephesians 5:23) So the almost religious devotion the woman in these stories has for her husband is nothing less than what the Bible ordains.

Mindslut, pay no attention to the Pharisee in the comments. This Christian at least thinks your fantasies are hot. Go forth and multiply (and write more!) :)

that you've found your purpose. No stuck-up slut, here, just an honest slave to her desires. Or better yet, to his.