All Comments on 'Please Come Back'

While I enjoy this type of story, it was sadly lacking. You need to find yourself an editor. The story was choppy and I had a hard time reading parts of it. Other than that, not bad.

Perfection.. I mean this was 100% perfectly executed.

He should have cum inside her and knocked her up. He had nothing to loose in impregnating her with his offspring. Maybe he can even use the kid to keep the mother in line.

I liked it, well written and nicely paced.