All Comments on 'Please, Miss, Please May I Cum?'

great job! can't wait to see what all happens next week and to see what punishment is instore for sweet Elle.

Damn. How do writers do it? That was smoking hot! Loved everything about it. This one will become one of my new favorites

A very good start. Ella clearly needs more (and so do I).

I enjoyed this very much. Hope you write more!

A beautiful, delicious story. Well written!

Excellent first story. Looking forward to seeing the further adventures of Sasha and elle ;)

Page one: you lose your readers bouncing between the present and the past. 3⭐️

Pages two and three: much better when you focused on the interpersonal aspect of the story. 5⭐️

this was such a great story I´m currently working on my own but the one I had in mind at first might be long so in the mean time maybe ill come up with something else

one quick question I have is the Authors words note at the start was that put in with the text area or in the short description part? I have many ideas myself but just joined here and wanna learn as much as possible before I publish

Awesomunedo!!!

Quite delicious...

Reads like a man wrote it.