by rd75000
A titillating, fun story! The level of detail in costume choices and song repertoire gave the story depth and realism. The pace is good. I found myself breezing through it despite 5 pages.
The intelligent writing and the care with which you described all the decisions and backstage responsibilities that went into her career modifications made this a real pleasure to read. I think you got the friendly professionalism between her and her manager just right. The whole story was a voluptuous tease that ended up giving the audience what it wanted. Thanks for sharing.
Very well written. It was almost like I was right there in the audience watching it.
Welcome back! I'm glad to see you writing here again, and with an entertaining story at that. Please keep it up!
Really enjoyed this excellent story! Great pacing, excellent writing and a most satisfying payoff! You have a knack for crafting female characters who are in charge of their own sexuality and get a thrill out of their exposure.
I hope this means you are writing regularly again and we can look forward to more!
Wonderfully written story, (5 stars) with a lot of appropriate detail. But no serious singer can get away with posing nude in a concert. Her next show will be in a strip joint, but perhaps well attended and well-paid.
This story was an instant favorite.
I enjoyed it a lot, as all your stories.
To be honest, i'd prefer it, if she did first some shows , as they were planned and then ended up with her sharing all, after some more motivation by her fans.
I guess, i realy enjoyed the story and i'd like it to keep going some more.
I hope you are back for good and we can expect more stories from now on. Maybe even a sequel to this one!
Anyway, thank you and 5 stars from me
Kim gave the audience what they wanted and you the author gave your readers what we wanted! Excellent buildup to the climax. Sexy but not slutty, titillating but not trashy.
Wondering if any of her classmates or professors, or even her boyfriend were in the audience.
I'll be checking out your other stories.
I love this story, I really felt like it was me up on the stage it was so well described. The emotional journey is so well portrayed, and the mixture of worry and excitement really rings true.
Amazing story, thank you for posting. Great buildup, impeccable grammar and spelling, and lovely characters. A great fantasy. And the ending is satisfying but also leaves the reader asking for more. Thank you!
Best story I've read on this site in a while. Original and sexy, with a great main character. Thanks for writing!
The story is very good and well written, it's very much an original story and the main character are believable and interesting. I wonder if there's going to be a sequel to this story, maybe a public performance, like a concert or festival.
Well written, building perfectly to the final - just thought though that the the new show reveals everything too quickly - I believe it would have been more in character to have her progressively showing herself, baring all maybe at the third or fourth show. Nevertheless thumbs up