by Mystic Enchantress
El cuento esta buenisimo. Lo tenia parado todo el tiempo que leia. Estoy esperando el otro.
You are excellent at getting the sensual qualities of your story across. Being a guy, I loved the picture you painted of her sucking dick and swallowing cum. You covered every detail about a girl who REALLY loves going down on her guy (I imagined he was me of course...LOL). She certainly knows how to coax a spurting orgasm out of a guy... I'll have to sign off and go wake up my gf for a quick suck...YAHOO! . . . . malapulga@yahoo.com
you have produced a nice,sofisticated erotic story. What next to continuation.