All Comments on 'Pleasure Manor Ch. 01'

While there were some lines that could've used some work, this story has some potiental.

Decent start but ends abruptly, just like a man who cums and then rolls over to go to sleep!

I thought the writing was good, the story line good, the descriptions steamy and hot. Please continue with this story

Good begining for a good story. Ended as it should for a first chapter. Hopefully more chapters are to follow telling of Joshua's journey!!

My name is Joshua, and it was fun to imagine myself in the character's place. Please continue the story.