All Comments on 'Ploughed My Bhabhi in Farmhouse'

Two paragraphs were all I could stand before it became too painful to continue, and I had to force myself that far.

Give up. People don't want to read what you submit.

Please visit the link “Writer’s Resources” on the index page of Literotica. You will find numerous articles that will help you format your dialogues, write grammatically correct sentences, and other stuff that will help you write better stories.

That is if you want to be a good writer. Otherwise you can continue posting such crap and no one will take you seriously.