All Comments on 'Plums Get Some Sugar'

This probably only makes sense to the author. Too many references that cannot be unpacked. Far too many grammar errors. I genuinely wondered if it was a parody, there are so many pronouns which are misspelled. Get an editor.

A good story until the argument...

Agreed the argument at the end doesn’t fit. They just helped each other. I think a more fitting ending would be him lifting the blindfold just in time to see her licking her hand and cumming. She then gives the excuse that it is for the video but a way that the reader knows the truth (she couldn’t stop herself). Thanks tho

You are barely literate. Go back to school, clearly too young to be here.