All Comments on 'Pointy Patty'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Pretty Dumb

FIrst off, nobody's nipples are three and a half inches long. Second, there's very little going on here, despite your half-assed attempt at character development. Patty is cold and distant, and then suddenly, inexplicably warms up, but we have no idea why and very little insight ot detail. Third, using cartoony porn-lingo like "fiery cavern," "volcanic twat" and 'molten hot iron" marks you as an amateurish clown. Better luck next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ha ha ha ha ha!

3 1/2 inch nipples! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!! Get real!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Check out Pornhub and type in huge nipples. Yes, Pretty Dumb and Anonymous, they exist.

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