All Comments on 'Police Officer and Teacher Love Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
You need a proof reader!!!

A great story that would read even better without the typos and wrong predictive text!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
police officer and teacher

Your work is great for a new writer keep up the good work and before long you will become everyone's favorite writer you are doing good so keep it up don't let anyone dissuade you because I am mesmerized by the story thank you Bobby

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Love triumphs

All you need is love may sound trite, but its is true here. Jake and Adam weather Adam's wound, and together they grow even deeper in love. Adam's beautiful sexy body, especially his large cock and his hairy chest, make Jake feel so comfortable. Keep them loving each other, and growing even more deep in their love!

MarkbikeMarkbikealmost 6 years ago
Top romance

Great story. You took your time to let the to ancestors build and didn't have them fucking as soon as they met. Good to have a supportive family involved, too. Keep writing.

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