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DrmaxcDrmaxcover 3 years ago

I thought the first part came over as really original with the emphasis on pre-cum and cum and what Amber did with it and where it went. Very much liked how he was hard so much of the time and things just carry on regardless. I rather hoped intercourse would not happen and the story would stay at that fetish/somewhat weird level but that all, perhaps inevitably. changed to what was pretty run of the mill.

phlxxlphlxxlover 3 years ago

Very good story just one strange thing.

When you already added Bailey's to your coffee why add sugar?

BAILEY'S is quite over-sweet.

But maybe that's why he got a third orgasm. ;)

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