All Comments on 'Pool Room Fun'

Your characters have no depth, they are all useless shit. Chuckie is truly a piece of human filth.

Good thoughts behing story. Could have used more depth of characters but you did bring information out as the story progressed. Why would husband agree to all this unless was something they had discussed in past. Keep up the writing the only way to get better is to keep trying.

i had been sitting here all day, reading stories, looking at pictures, getting so excited. i had to have a cock in my mouth or man cunt. i decided to shower and head for the peep show or maybe even pick up a whore if i founf a halfway clean looking one.i know i can always get fucked if i want to,i thought i would wash my man pussy. it used to be an asshole, but it has been fucked so often, it has loosened up and is now my man pussy, or, in a raunchy mood, my man cunt. as i massaged it with the soap i realized it felt good, my pussy was alive. i rubbed a bit more and realized it was slippery. idea! i slowly pushed one end in. marvelous. i wound up furiouslyt fucked myself as my hot cunt murmured in happiness. this happened a short time ago. you woyuld belive me if you were here to see the cum i am letting dry in my legs and check my man cunt, still flushed with the action. i wish i could have traded place with this slut whore. i have been gang banged before, by men and women, but not for a while

This is a well written nasty story, nothing more and certainly no less. Depth of character is not called for. References to relationships and situations outside the bar are enough to spur the imagination. Filling in the details is what an imagination is for after all.

Thanks for this no-nonsense fuck and suck debase the wife story.

Your writing is why I give you 50%. The story leaves a lot to be desired. Realism, and making it believable is what makes great stories. Of course in your world, husband want their wives to have sex with other men. Normally, no man would agree with this, and adultery would likely end in divorce. Just another slut wife, and wimp/cuckold husband. There are too many of them on this site. Adultery has consequences - usually life changing, and many times life ruining.

Thanks for the heads up on this story phoenix764,that way i won't bother or waste my time on this piece of shit. i agree that cheating has consequences.

boy it looks like phoenix764 should spend more time writing his OWN stories, then maybe his comments will mean something, also, if you don't like stories about wives getting screwed, then DON'T READ THEM!!! I don't get how people bitch about them, but the still read them! If you don't like what's on t.v. then change the channel! I like these stories, and I think we need more of them. I suppose he thinks it would be alright for the man to get laid!

I don't vote on stories due to trolls and Goblins. I liked part B better, but then again I love sluts; the sluttier the better! It was a great stroke story, but didn't have much of a plot.

Much too deep and serious - the loving husband was much too like the normal hubby - now the plot was wonderful except the pimp forgot to collect for his wife whores wares.

Next time not so deep - just have the pimp bring all his friends for a gangbang - oh say 50 or so.

With your skills why chuckus?

It got me hard... why are you abusing the guy who wrote this? Hot nasty sex with lots of cum... yumm!!!

Chuck is gone at the end of both

B for sure.

Wow so proud to be a middle age whore. Now everyone in town will know what a nasty slut she is so at least she won’t be alone at the health department getting her weekly shots. Have to wonder how these writers come up with such disgusting and sick tales. The whore would be a laughing stock going forward and end up just be everyone’s cum dumb. Ridiculous

Good old Cuckie with an autobiographical story.