All Comments on 'Pool Table Trouble'

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KitPiscesKitPiscesalmost 3 years ago

Exceptionally HOT story. Minor criticism that the names seem to have gotten mixed up a few times which was a distraction to the wonderful eroticism. But still soooo HOT

JonathanBairJonathanBairalmost 3 years ago

Would love to read about the second game...... Do the ladys go home together?????

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Writer and editor of more than a hundred articles, short stories, and books. I love writing, and I write for me. I love to create fictional stories, putting people into circumstances I wish were mine. And I love to edit stories for other writers.