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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Good story! You did make the classic taut/taught mistake though, watch out for that one. Taught is the past tense of teach, the adjective is spelled taut. (I know it doesn't matter, but I see this particular one so often that I want everyone to know about it and make their writing better.)

Underground_ManUnderground_Man5 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the kind words and great catch. For whatever reason I am terrible at homophones in typed text. Hopefully this should be fixed soon.

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I've been writing for a while mostly in the context of RPs. I've only recently felt good enough about my work to start posting it here, but I still have a lot to learn and am always very curious to hear people's thoughts on my work. My interest in writing is predominantly to ...