All Comments on 'Poor Simon Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Nice chapter :)

But please, don't rush it. The quality is more important than quantity.

P.S Wanna see real master/simon loving =}

Cruel2BKindCruel2BKindabout 13 years agoAuthor
You will...

But it will take some time, Master Anthony also has some mental barriers to break down.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 13 years ago

The dynamics are interesting the Master has to train but does he/doesn't he understand the grief of Simon? Is this a factor in why he isn't being so cruel or is this who MA really is? Can't wait to find out...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
it's odd...

Jesus, what kind of human trafficking center is this?

That being said, great story. I lIke it, but it's a little unrealistic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Brilliant

This is quite honestly the best series I have ever read. Fantastic, keep it up

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