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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This is going really well, I hope you continue this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Exciting story.

I would love to read more about Ai.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

yes would like to see this continue ,, really like the sex doll angle at her work as well as the porn shoot

RanceSamaRanceSamaover 3 years ago
My excitement is immeasurable and my day is saved. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

I love this story as a whole. But this chapter has me hooked. Why? Ai is turning her life around, which is lovely to see. Taking risks like her former BFF. Alas, Li, her brother, is fucking things up again... Hopefully she'll become a little more independent in the future...

But either way regardless, I like how she sees everything like an opportunity now. Instead of being carried by the proverbial current as per usual. She's becoming stronger which is adorable to observe. Hopefully one day she'll be able to say fuck you, I get paid for this bs you make me do for free to her boss lol.

Dasvidaniya O Author mine!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The inclusion of an incestual relationship is hampering what would be a great story for me (albeit I think her predicaments she gets landed in ought to have been more incremental). I really hope the following chapters don't linger on that aspect too long.

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