All Comments on 'Porn Shoot with My Sister'

A really terrific story perfectly spun. I would though have liked it to finish with him coming inside her. It was implied that would eventually happen, but being there when it did would have been better still, a six on the score card.

ANDY IS AN ANNOYING LOSER FROM THE START

Dad dying and the family about to lose the house seems to be a recurring theme. Did this happen to you?

I liked your story a lot as I like most of what you write I note you have over 300 comments for you to have that much of a reaction you must be doing something right . Just a couple of points there are a few typos and genders misplaced but nothing too drastic. Oh, and this is the umpteenth time I have read this. Brilliant.

Obwohl ich glaube das Schwangerschaft und Kinder bekommen nicht so dein Ding sind, wünsche ich mir dennoch das du ein zweites Teil schreibst, welches genau diese Sachen enthält.

Ich meine was ist ein Happy End onhe eine grosse und glückliche Familie?

This one definitely needs a sequel dude!!!

If only things like this could really happen… And when I was very very young I was attacked by a man and I was a very young age, There was no mental health during that time for something like that, I was involved with my sister. We both knew nothing about what to do So was I fooling around? yes. was there any intercourse, I don’t remember that there was. Being Catholic it was very very very taboo. Fast forward 43 years and one marriage later I got the help too late to save the marriage. I was messed up for being attacked for that many years. I find myself sometimes thinking back about what I did with my sister with no remorse. But I find stories like yours extremely powerful. I think America has it wrong with incest… As long as there are both consensual parties. I find myself wondering if I’m still stuck as an eight year old being attached because of my views on incest. This was a beautiful story.

That was a great story that started out as fucking for money and ended in pure life long love. Beautiful, what everyone dreams of in life.

Good story and very hot. I'm just not sold on the love at the end. I felt rather lust and kink vibes from Alicia and Andy, and I think it would have been better to explore each other's feeling in a second story.

Teija sisko ja minä nussimme sukurutsassa hotellissa.

Teija tuli raskaaksi. Elimme kuten aviopari, huolimatta insestisuhteestamme. Vapauttaa henkisesti kertoa fantasioistaan. Kerromme toisillemme kaiken. Teija ratsastaa sylissäni.

Amazing story! Yeah there were spelling and punctuation errors but the story had me so in it's grip that by the 3rd page I barely noticed them

The plot was very grippy. But, the last love part should be elaborated into a sequel.

I gave up on tnis one by the end of the first page, put off by the weenie "I wasn't looking at you!" brother theme. tired and overused, and completely unattractive to any hot sister.

There are a few spelling mistakes, but honestly I didn't really notice because the story was so captivating. Also, I love how Andy is a little submissive. Total turn on. 10/10

Good story. I was pretty sure big sister tjoght it was a golden opportunity to get little brother to make love to her.

I really liked this story. Especially the long buildup. Very good character development. I liked the way Andrew slowly came around from a prude to lust to true feeling. That was a little less clear with Alicia. I think she wanted to help her mom not she also wanted to get it on with Andrew. When she did decide… what a subduction!! So sexy. So hot. Excellent writing

Bravo

bien réussie

Amazing story! I love the ending thx for a nice story❤️❤️

Terrific. I began to suspect I read it before when I was on page 2. By page 3 I was sure I had, quite a while back. But I enjoyed it just as much the second time. Thank you.

Lost me at end...

what's the 2nd 'good deed'...?

The declaration of love by Andy seemed a little bit forced, contrived owing to his feelings of revulsion at the beginning of the story, but I'm probably nitpicking I loved the story and Alicia 's sincerity towards her mother's predicament was really well portrayed. I think LC was getting a bit carried away with the erotica of the tale owing to the increasing number of errors and misplaced words as the story progressed,😂 but as I said I enjoyed it, must have I've read it more than once.

Wonderful story and very well written. I few typo's but easy enough to read through. Bu the end of Andy & Alicia's tryst I was hoping that, maybe, Steve and Mary were siblings too. So thank you - you just made my day!

Love to see follow on to include mother

Hilarious!! And sexy.

I don't know if it was intentional but those First 2 pages (especially the 2nd) were Funn-eee! Alicia was "testing the waters" sort of with Andy trying to get him interested in doing the deed. He is like No Way and all this stuff. She has him all worked up and ready to jump her bones and this is when she pulls the plug and goes to her room. He is left sitting there like a Deer in the headlights wondering, 'What the Hell Happened'?. I had to chuckle at that. But This was a very sexy story and would have liked to have seen it continued. Great job LC68. 5🌟

Really well written and an amazing bulld up!!

Great story i hope you have a second part for it ,

Aside from a few typos, the writing was amazing! I think I can safely say that you succeeded in making the scenario realistic.

I'm hoping there will be a part two to explain the final comment and to show how the two of them are going to make it work while living so near their family.

An incredibly beautiful story, one of the best and it feels so very real.

I would love to read a sequel, maybe when they are older, like Steve and Mary, or perhaps in current time with mother too

Yes it is the closest form of love!

Amazing story, I always liked the slow burn kind of story and this was spot on. even had some funny moments!

I absolutely loved this story and would love to read a sequel. The only thing I would suggest differently besides the few typos is maybe to reference a model/movie or porn star when referring to Alicia's look to give the reader a better imagine. Bravo though as this was truly a great read!

Super story. Thank you.

Really beautiful story, one of the best I've read so far. Love the piece

A well written and extremely hot story.

I don't understand Andy's reluctance to fuck his sister. I know of no teenage boy who hasn't fantasized about his sister(s).

With raging hormones and a hard on, with a beautiful girl offering herself, I don't know why he was hesitating. Maybe its just a story plot thing.

I enjoyed the story quite a bit in spite of the problems with spelling and grammar. Sadly, such problems detract from the a good story and they are easy to avoid most of the time.

And another banger of a story

I truly lode your story, and have been a vry big fan of incest stories of brothers and sisters. Just like you and your sister my lover and husband , and best friends is also my younger sister. I could never love some on in so many ways as I love my own sister.

Wow, pretty hot! 5 stars.

Great story. Would love to read how their lives turned out

Super hot! Brother sister incest is my most important desire! My own older sister died at birth, but I dream that me might have become lovers!

Excellent story! 5/5... The only thing I could think of that would make it better is a short epilog...

3 1/2 years later, Andy's graduated with an Engineering degree, and Alicias' working with her mother in Advertising. Andy applies for a job and gets an odd request for his upcomming interview. "Bring his sister with him". They both arrive. Go into the conference room where the interview is held, and are met by the companies owners... a beautiful red head lady and her handsome husband with grading hair.

Wonderfully written. Thank you for the story.

Great story! I was almost expecting Alicia to give Steve a bit of oral action and Mary to sample Andrew as well.

It was a fun story. I can't seem to get over the flawed premise, though. If it's a house that was in the family for so many years, it wouldn't have a huge mortgage. It would have been paid off long ago. If anything, the mom could have taken out a line of equity for some needed cash when she lost her job.

The reason why its not a 5 star is because there could be more detail ls on when they meet the coupls and have sex. Its a good story but definitely there could be a spin off. Can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe the brother and sister can go back to the other couple to play with them and the swap etc. Let me know if you need help writing it.

A great storyline and well written with just the right amount of detail about what the characters are thinking and the doubts in their minds. I’m sure that something similar could happen in a place like Las Vegas where money seems to be able to buy anything. I’m now off to sample some of your other works as this story has raised my curiosity about what else you have come up with. Bye for now from deepest Lincolnshire in England.

Great story. Well written except for misspelling. I look forward to the next story. 5 stars!!

There haven't been blood tests for marriage since 1980. Montana technically had one on the books until 2019, but it wasn't enforced and has since been dropped. Those blood tests did not identify relatives; they were pre-DNA. They were mostly to check for sexually transmitted diseases and some for sickle cell anemia.

Not the best story of yours but it kept me reading. The sister being a whore from the start bothered me and so did the brother pretending he didn’t want to be with his sister from the start. He clearly wanted his sister since it said he has for years.

Spelling was amiss throughout, but really enjoyed the story and the way you built all characters as the story progressed. Thank you for several nightly arousals.

Again I could only regret not having a sister. This most unlikely story was fun to experience vicariously as all participants seemed to have their needs rewarded. A good proofreader would improve this tale by correcting misspellings and incorrect grammar.

This was an incredibly hot story. I loved it. It could use a review by a good editor (there are more issues than in others of your stories) but I wouldn’t change the story at all.

Love the story,well done ,I hope you con. Continue with this one what happened later between the siblings did they marry, did Andrew have sex with his mother?

I have read many stories on here but never commented. This is by far the best story I've ever read

Outstanding. Well written and sexy. I’ve read several of your stories and this one is the best yet. It’s a long list, so I need to get to reading!!!

Fantastic story absolutely one of the very top stories I have ever read!!!!

Once again, a beautiful, sexy love story.

amazing story!!! want more like this

This was such a sexy story. I wish there were more parts to it because the character are endearing and so hot.

Amazing story, makes me wish I had a sister just like Alicia!

very enjoyable incest tale,,liked it, alicia character is strong confident woman, and thats fine but why was andrews character so conflicted and negative..as the old saying goes,,"woman need a reason for sex,,men just need a place"!

Great story. Now for Andrew to get to fuck his mom and sister together !!