All Comments on 'Porn Shoot with My Sister'

I always love reading about brother and sister love it is the strongest love there is this story is very good and I would love to see another chapter but please don't include the mom it will ruin the whole story incest or whether I like calling it brother and sister true love is special to me I don't think it's right for mom and son or daughter and father is right it leaves a bad taste in my mouth just thinking about it

That was an incredibly tending loving story about brother sister love, l loved reading every word, thank you so much for sharing, l was kind of hoping that Steve & Mary really were the kids mother an their uncle as l was reading the story towards the end, but whether that is true or not doesn't matter all that much to the story in the end, it was just an awesome story full stop, l just loved the whole story, hopefully one day there maybe another chapter or 2

At the beginning it was soooo slow.

but as it went on , damn that was one of the best reads

I thought this had a rather original premise. It's been a while since I've come across a story worth reading here, from the first sentence to the last paragraph. I'm not sure if I'm buying the motive of the couple at the hotel, but on the 1 to 5 scale, I gave this story a 5!

What a erotically hot story. Just loved it and with a happy ending with the siblings professing their love for each other.

Just great......

Sis is hot and he fighting getting a peice of it. H o w nuts are you?

please write a continuation of this story

This story was amazing. Enough so to inspire me to leave my very first commetn on this site, even having been reading stories here for almost 10 years.

Same as another poster, I thought the concept was very original, and extremely psychologically engaging. The sex with dialogue, the aggression of the sister balanced with her nervousness - all SO well done. Very very very good job you did here :)

Thanks for your story, I thought it exceptionally well written and pretty HOT!

well done I like the way you put the characters personalities together. As a favor could you make the next brother a bit smarter, I'm starting to get a complex. :)

Really good character development. You actually make incest appealing.

ummm...more really i would like more please. ok chapter two ya ya ya that's it chapter two!!!

Loved this from the beginning. Please write more, love the style !

Really enjoyed the piece. I remember feeling like that with some friends of my mother's who came to visit with twin girls. One was really foreward sexually and we went for a walk one hot Sunday and we had sex in a woodland. It was my first time and my legs shook like jelly, so exciting.

Very well written story. It's so good that it could work with a different relationship between the principals. Things Alicia says ring true with my experiences, even though Andrew seems a little slow on the uptake. Most guys I know would have dealt with the hesitations much sooner than he did.

Several have asked for a Chapter Two. Add me to that list.

I have not read a bad story you’ve written. keep up the good work.

Wow that brought back some memories my sister passed away some time ago now but wow thank you so much for bringing back the memories just wow

Loved your story - reminded me of my hot sister. Would like to see another story about what becomes of Andy and Alicia

I cannot get over how hot that story was. You are a master at what you do.

...and then knocked it out of the park! You took a chance telling the challenge story and upped the ante, but you delivered the goods. The story begs for a sequel but it might be better left as is with the promise of things to come. Well done

Olin siskon kanssa käymässä tutun pariskunnan luona. He kertoivat olevansa sisko ja veli. Nussin siskon pillua paljaalla.

look you in the eye with my most serious expression and try as hard as possible not to grin as I put my thumbs up.

Great story, agree it begs a sequel but probably doesn't need one either, so confusing :)

This was one of the most beautiful stories I have read here on the site but also so HOT. This is the first story of yours that I have read and can't wait to get to the rest.

Just reread this story and loved it.

I enjoy these type of stories when I feel the love shown.

Thankyou for your story

I made it halfway through the first page even though I was ready to quit in the first paragraph where the son was crying about losing the house. Add in another 6+ paragraphs detailing their personal finance and I'm out. Bored now and already hate the son and mother for being morons. Which means the premise is too flawed to hold my interest. Either 1. they are truly that stupid and I'm not into stupid people regardless of how hot they may be or 2. it's not believable because no thinking person would do that.

I love your style of writing, but this one feels like its unfinished. Please continue with what happens next.

for me, the reality kicked in with this one in th first couple of paragraphs. The parents moved into the dads parents house some 50 years and the house is still owned by the bank. Doesn't add up.

Most mortgages are 30 year loans and its possible a second or even third one has been taken out for home improvements, car repairs, health issues, etc. so, it's entirely possible to have a home for 50 years and still not own it.

Great job.

Katsoimme siskon kanssa pornoa. Samalla nussimme kiimassa.

This is a lovely, heart warming story. Thank you for writing it.Kvi5zk

I need more. Why did you have to stop in the middle of very hot and sweet sex? Damn. You're evil.

Teija siskoa panetti ja hän tuli sänkyyni alasti. Nuolin ja nussin siskon pillua. Ei käytetty ehkäisyä.

Your bio claims that your stories are fiction. Well, not quite so. Very autobiographical, if I may say so. Your richness of detail and depth emotion tell your readers that you are writing 100% from experience, Mary dearest!

For the reader: yes, I know quite well what I'm saying. Having enjoyed Mary's exquisite sexuality and her husband's timidity over the past 20+ years, I can vouch for her insatiable libido in the face of a trembling hubbie.

Keep writing, my delicious FIVE STAR cunt-whore!

Teija ja minä asuimme vuokralla tätimme Metan omistamassa asunnossa.

Olimme sängyssä nussimassa, kun Metta halusi kolmen kimppaan. Mahtavaa nussia kahta naista yhtaikaa.

Wow, that was incredibly hot! Thank you. I did enjoy this story immensely. Would love to read more of Alicia and Andrew...

A very very good story. Its now in my favorites section. the only problem I had was the speed bumps of some bad spelling, repeat wording and sentence structure errors. It slowed down the otherwise outstanding story telling.

This submittion is by far my favourite erotic novel ever. I love reading erotic novels, and this is really my favourite as of yet. Plot well developed, characters well described, and my favourite, plot twist at the end. This story had me reading for hours, and not getting tired of it at all. Plesse keep up the good work!!

incredible story once again from you. loved it. will definitely read it again and again...

Very well written; I would gladly read it again and again. Very descriptive and full of zest! Thanks for the great story!

Teija on strippari ja tykkää ottaa suihin ja antaa pillua paljaalla.

Kävin katsomassa esityksiä seksiklubilla, jossa sisko on stripparina, onneksi kukaan ei tuntenut meitä. Menimme hänen iltavuoronsa jälkeen hänen yksiöönsä ja nussimme paljaalla erittäin kiimassa. Sisko käyttää pessaaria, joten huoletta voimme nussia.

Thank you for a Very Entertaining, Engaging and Very Erotic Story of Forbidden Fruit.

BTW an EXTRA BIG THANKS & KUDO'S for NOT giving Alicia ENORMOUS BIG TRIPLE F tits or something equally stupid. Nice firm Medium tits are....PERFECT!!

This is exactly the style of incest story that I enjoy. First their pre-incest life/sibling relationship. Followed by either a slow by a slow burn of growing closer, or being thrown into a situation where they are suddenly shoved close (like this one) and looking to spend the rest their lives together. Then hot loving affectionate sex, followed by a bit of follow up - a "they lived happily ever after". I rate this story in the top one or two that I've read on this site.

I too would love to read a couple of follow ups. First a follow up of the next few weeks as their relationship solidifies and grow even closer or a vacation for two story. Another where they decide to get a place of their own and settle in. Maybe another where they meet up with Steve and Mary.

I read this story several years ago and only today found it again. It was just as hot to read today as it was a few years ago. Great concept, great story! Thanks so much for writing this!

I’ve read several of your stories and I think your writing is really good.

I’m not Always into a incest, but this story was the best I’ve ever read . Would like to see you expand on it. Also do or have someone proof read it for you . Too many errors

5 stars, I wish I could give it ten!

Wow. Wow!!! This is the first story I have read by this author. Its absolutely excellent! Multi-dimensional characters that the reader cares about; well-developed story; positive energy; no gratuitous mean language. This story is easily one of the best I've read on Literotica! Cheers!!!

That was awesome. Absolutely loved it. Thank you

Whew. I was worried it was going to be tawdry but it really felt like a story that could happen. Great work. Thank you!

Katsoimme siskon kanssa pornoa. Parhaita pornotähtiä molempien mielestä on Asia Carrera ja Lisa Ann. Teija ja minä nussimme kiimassa ja kuvittelimme tekevämme pornoleffaa.

I truly love this story it is so well written a nice mix of people involved. One of the best I’ve read in a long time.

I love this <3

Loved it. Got so turned on. I even leaked when the two couples got in the bed. Very erotic story.....dam.

Plan and simple, a truly outstanding and wonderful story. Many thanks to the author.

A family I have grown to know. I would very much like to follow them into their future.

this is the first of your works I've read. i loved it! I'm now going to read the others. You have a gift that should be shared with all. I hope to see many more stories of yours.

What an amazing story! It was so hot! The premise was wonderful, especially as it developed until the surprising twist near the end! This is the first story of yours that I've read, but I look forward to reading your others! Thanks for giving me a great turn-on with this one!

I have read many stories here in Literotica. But by far, this one grabbed me from the beginning and I couldn't wait for the next page. I have some actual experience with my step mom and one of my half sisters'. I hope someday to get the courage to try and express those memories into a readable story. Thank you so much for this. I will be reading more from your list. I wonder, do any of your stories have actual events that inspired them?

This is one of my top 5 favorite stories on the Internet!

Although this may be a fictional account, does anyone doubt in this wide world of ours, somewhere two siblings have indeed followed this path? The love of family is the strongest love of all, and the lessons learned in accepting each other are also, very strong indeed! As I grew up, my first "crushes" were on cousins because they were gorgeous, friendly, smart and (well) accessible, period. We never did anything like the brother and sister here but, as a young man I tell you even watching a cousin brush her hair gave me feelings of love toward her I barely understood! Just amazing, just gorgeous, oh yes, she was one of the most beautiful creatures ever to exist! And I had more than one cousin defining these feelings for me as I grew up, I had three of them! All incredible beauties and so very smart, they defined am image of how all women in the world must be, for me beginning in my pre-teenage years - when the only practical example of "love" I had experienced was exchanging simple paper St. Valentine's Day cards in Elementary school. So yes, it is the experiences within family that define the person we will become later, whether those were physically intimate, totally innocent or something more is actually less important than the long-lasting "lessons" learned.

Don't be afraid to tell someone how important they are to you, or were to you, because in all sincerity they have played a role in life as important as any parent, teacher or closest friend. Thanks Lovecraft68 for exploring these feelings and ideas!

This is one of my favourite stories. I come back it it several times for another read.

I always wonder what happened afterwards. I would enjoy an update as to how Alicia and Andrew are doing now.

Thanks for the story

Only wished you did a sequel. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

An excellent well told story. Holds the readers interest to the very end. A well deserved 5 stars.

Loved the story. Had sex with my half-sister for over 40 years starting in 1964. Too young to talk about here. She was two years younger but actually initiated it because of her constant horniness. We were very kinky and tried about everything you can think of. Never got caught. If we had lived in the same house I doubt we would have been so lucky but only having a few times a year to be together alone we spent it all naked and being very sexual. I really miss her as she had one of those heart attacks from hell with no history of problems in the family. As she was very much bi, my wife even misses her as well. Keep up the good works.

I do find it funny the different sensibilities around the world. I grew up in a family where I had seen everyone naked well before I was an adult. It's not like we were nudists or exhibitionists, just pure non-sexual nudity was not made a big deal about. It always makes me roll my eyes when it is made out to be such a huge thing to see your sister or brother naked in these stories.

Not applicable here, but seeing as it is not incest to marry and have sex with your cousin here, I struggle to see the issue in stories that list that as incest and I'm sure that people from France, Spain, Japan and a whole host of countries where sibling relationships are legal would have a similar reaction to this story.

Despite the typos that seemed to increase in volume as the story got hotter..., it's one of the best brother/sister stories out there, thank you.

Another brilliant story!!! Thank You so much!!!

I cried as the LOVE was so truly Intense and Real as the buildup was great as I figured from the beginning what was up with the other couple and now they have converted and turned another couple just like them into the same forever Love.. I have several sisters but never felt that and can only imagine how Intense it could be … Would Love to see a whole series on this or a continued meeting of the mysterious couple..

ok.

typos, the odd misspelling, or malapropism.

still, i read it.

don´t have a sister, but i have a stepdaughter i´d have fucked if she´d given me the opportunity.

thanks, keep writing.

Thank you. Was a fin, heartwarming, sexy story.

Beautifully written unlike it being just a porn story it was more of a love story. Other than the sex for money from another couple very believable.

I just noticed that very clever nod to your Siblings with Benefits series, and am shocked it took me three rereads of this lovely story to do so.

I am flabbergasted! Wow! Well Done!

This is by far the best on Literotica. I've read it 3 times, and will again. This not just porn, It's a beautiful love story.

Now this is what brother/sister love is all about! It is NOT some dark wrong that should be ridiculed and the participants ostracized. That occurs because of those choir boy sodomy scum bags over in Rome.

For many thousands of years on this planet brothers and sister marriage was as common as any other. And acceptable in many societies. What is truly important is do they truly love and care for and about each other? In a world where love gets harder to find with each passing day, any true legitimate love shouldn’t be dismissed. Sure if both have a recessive gene that puts the odds of a Down’s syndrome baby coming from the union veryhigh, then common sense and decency says no. But that could happen to other couples as well.

Anyway, THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORY! It made me smile and feel warm all over.

Fantastic , what dreams are made of

Brill story,thank you.

Amazing story as always, however I liked the mother version more[specially ch.2], it had more of everything (built up, tension, twist, romance, erotic sex scene). you are my favorite author @lovecraft68 specially in mom/son story, I hope to read a new mom/son story (your fans miss you mate). thanks 5**

Wow, love this love storey.

This one got me hot! I loved it. Total 5 star.

Great job... again

Thanks for sharing.

(9/17/2021) Your story was both erotic and tender and I enjoyed the read very much. I do have to mention one thing. If the house had been in the family for at least fifty years wouldn't the mortgage be paid off years ago? Your story was still great. I just thought I'd point that out. Maybe gramps turned the mortgage into an equality loan and spent too much. 5 stars.

Enjoyed it very much! I have enjoyed almost all of them but you need an editor. Some things minor, some not.

Outstanding! (What’s Alicia’s phone number?! 😜)

Very good story! A few word & typing errors. But over all I think my favorite sibling story I've ever read. Thanks!😊

Very good! Best bro/ sis story I’ve read here.

Should be 4 stars because of the errors, but hot enough for 5 stars.

Bill S.

Brings back fond memories, thankyou. There really is nothing like it when your brother enters you. My whole body shivered and convulsed, every time. It's like I lost control of my senses when he was inside me. Best times ever.

A solid 5. Forget about all the 'picky people. Just keep writing.

Metta sisko on onnellinen antaessaan pillua paljaalla. Tuntuu niin taivaalliselta nussia siskon pillua.

Your 1 of the better writers on here not a whole lot of mistakes such misspelled words and run off sentences this 1 like a bunch of others is more or less a well written story good job

Please continue this story. The romance built in was excellent. I’m curious to find out what happens next between Alicia and Andy. Not to mention if they ever meet Mary and Steve again.

Amazing story. Their love is so beautiful.

Hot story

I am becoming a pretty big fan if yours

Don

I’m a sucker for a love story. Perfect end.

That's great.

You have repeated a thought I came to quite a long time ago. A brother and sister are the most complete relatives, since they both have genes from the same parents.

You say thank you for reading, I say thank you for sharing this story. It had eeverything, there was lust of course but there was also strong reluctance on the brothers part. It took all the power of persuasion from sis, to gain his trust and confidence to see this through. I had my own suspicions of the truth of the relationship of Steve and Mary, and their reasons for inaugurating such a risky project as the main premise of the story, but I thank you for sharing this, particularly as I believe it gives a truer insight into the reasons for incestuous relationships than a lot of the stories published here.

Hot and lovingly intense!

This is hands down one of the hottest brother sister story I have read. Great job. Thank you. 5*

Fun, Romantic, und Sexy!

10/10!!!!!