All Comments on 'Portal Gag'

Portal panties would be a nice sequel to this if you ever did one! Good story!

That was highly inventive - and what’s the answer to the final question? enquiring minds want to know. Preferably in portal part 2. 🙏🏼

I usually give low grades to short chapters, but this is an exception because of the creativity and believability.

Well done and very creative. What a nice device to have. Would have liked to have a bit more sessions of use and well as some untimely punishments (at church, at her home at night, in the office, etc. Do hope for more chapters (including the portal panties - both front and back). Oh, and there should be a clit tickler in the panties. Oh, and a portal bra with nipple clamps. What fun.

Thanks all for the comments. I know it's very short, even for me, but it felt right. I've wanted to do a portal story for a while now, but have struggled to find an idea that really worked.

This is a really clever concept.

Exceptional creativity. 5*

Really interesting story and well done! Loved it. The portal part reminded me of a short story by Piers Anthony called "The Bridge". Your story could easily have been in the sci-fi/fantasy category too.

Well this idea works well . Or should I say deep well ? Or it works well , deep . Lol .

This is the best concept!

Thanks for reading... :-)

Unexpected, delightful, and very sexy. Thank you!