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Woah_astyWoah_astyover 1 year ago

Wow. Just wow. I am amazed.

LadyAlexHarpLadyAlexHarpover 1 year agoAuthor

Good or bad context I really like this comment, Woah_asty lol

JessicaAlexanderJessicaAlexanderover 1 year ago

Very interesting and erotic. It would be nice to add more description to help build the picture of the characters. The heavy accent wasn’t really necessary to the plot line and writing the dialog phonetically to reflect the heavy accent was distracting and drew away from the story. You could have just mentioned he had a really thick accent and only draw attention to it if/when critical to the story/plot. Anyways, it’s very creative and I enjoyed it! I hope there is a part 2!

LadyAlexHarpLadyAlexHarpover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the advice, Jessica!

This was really an excuse to play around and experiment, so I appreciate the feedback!

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Hello, my name is Alexandria. I write highly explicit erotica specializing in monstergirls and the occasional monsterboy. Femdom is almost always a given with me but I like to play around with kinks a bit. I also love experimenting with genres from comedy to scifi to horror b...