All Comments on 'Power and Corruption Ch. 02'

Sexually transmitted diseases is a thing. So is prison. You want to know what gonorrhoea or herpes on the mouth looks like? Tru explaining that to her parents. Or a prolapsed rectum. Or having to wear a diaper.

Fantasy is one thing but science fucking fiction is another and a good author knows the difference.

I would suggest you’re not a good writer.

Love the story for the fun entertainment. An enjoyable read. You are doing a great job. This site is an erotic writing site so feel free to write the story as you see it should be written. I find it a fun story with crazy fun kids. So I will keep read them and encourage you to write more. Go for it and thanks for sharing and writing. Cheers.

You are most welcome and thank you for writing.

I am enjoying this fantasy story one which may never come to life in the real world but this world we are in here it is great. I wish there would be a way that either her friend or her teacher could get involved with her project. keep up the good work. Pappasleaze!