All Comments on 'Power Ch. 01'

brilliant fer a first go well done

Pretty good for a first story. Gave it a high score to encourage a new author.

wow, this story is really well written. I got so wet after reading it. It was such a turn on.

This was amazing keep writing. Just next time maybe watch out for typos and stuff

Shoplifter with mc powers considers murdering girls for bumping him on the sidewalk. Yeah, no thanks.