All Comments on 'Power of Attorney'

I read this story many years ago and it's just as good today. Maybe not so original today, but still above most of those since inspired by works such as this. Thanks for reposting and giving me the chance to read again.

This one had good dialogue and premise. But that is part of the problem. In the current legal environment, the things said to the secretary are a sure lawsuit in the making. Secondly, there never is any concrete action. So much literature and little erotica. The already lesbian lust makes it hardly a non-consent reluctance story and then there is no heroine here. There is zero characterization for the secretary, given the one person narration. But keep trying and spice it up. Start out with some action and then go back to the beginning. Thanks.

Entirely too long and no sex.

This is one of the hottest stories I've ever read, thankyou for posting!

Feels like this is the establishment chapter and things are going to kick off in the next one?

It's a good premise and interesting approach. Though as others have pointed out, it seems to lack any actual sex. Needed to actually see Jennifer submit.

Also need more of those transitional steps. You gloss over a lot of the fall. You spent a great deal of time detailing what seemed like 2-3 days worth of Jennifer's abuse of Kristina, but the fall seemed to cover several months in a fraction of the same writing. We needed to hear more about as the direction of dominance first began to switch. That single event of the secretary one-upping the partner was the spark, but what happened afterwards. It didn't simply jump to "you need to go on a diet". Jennifer would have attempted to reassert her dominance. Why didn't she? How did Kristina avoid it? Jennifer had to have done something. Did Kristina's smirk after the meeting forestall the retribution? You could have taken us through the first time where Kristina makes a mild suggestion directly to Jennifer and when Jennifer tries to squash it, Kristina pushes back, saying that a good leader knows how to use the resources maybe with a little flirtation, some innuendo, and Jennifer falters and accepts the suggestion. Then show how over the next few days, it happens again and again. Jennifer may try to redouble her control (despite secretly wanting to submit to Kristina), but then Kristina pulls off a well timed suggestion during a meeting with a senior partner and has more leverage over Jennifer. Then show how the suggestions escalate. Not just "time passes" with fleeting allusions to significant milestones, but details. Show how Jennifer goes home at night and gets herself off to visions of submitting to Kristina, then admonishes herself and wallows in her shame - only to be massively turned on again by the humiliation of Kristina starting to push back and assert herself more. That process should be like 2-3 full chapters.

Finally, like chapter 5 should be the "Months later..." scene, and where Kristina admits to being stressed over something and pushes Jennifer to help her relieve her stress. A massage maybe. Which she asks for again and again over the following days. Each one progressively more risque and inappropriate. Eventually the final scene you wrote and Kristina finally instructs Jennifer to get under the desk while Kristina does some work.

Anyway, hope to read more of your stuff.

I enjoyed this story. Would love to have seen some of Jennifer's downfall, but now you can add a part 2 and use this as a how we got here chapter. as some say there was no erotica (sex) in here but I don't think it is always needed in a get up to speed chapter. Hope you will consider another part. thanks for sharing.

Pappasleaze!

This story’s great! Who needs “sex” when you have this much power being exchanged in such a cruel and humiliating way!

Another excellent story by Katyn99. Jennifer was kind of tough on Kristina and just so could see how far she could go. Many women would have quit that job but Kristina didn't and even worked herself up the ladder to become Jen's boss. What an great plan of revenge! Now Kristina teases her new sub with her sexy panties and attire and Jennifer MUST comply or lose her secretary job. It doesn't tell about Jenn's lesbian actions or about Kristina's lezdom desires but we all know they are there. I truly hope for Jennifer's sake that she loves that tasty pussy when Kristina sits on her face!

I haven't read any of your stories yet but I will.

I just wanted to say that I loved the bio and that if you haven't written a story based on this, I think it could be very original.

Thanks, kindaDisturbing, for reading my bio. All of my stories which cover housecleaning work draw entirely on my own lived experience as domestic staff (at least as far as the cleaning parts are concerned!). Further to your suggestion, yes I might try to write a story or even a real-life account of my double-existence and how it affects my life — like the fact that my gym bag at the office often contains a nylon housecleaning dress, yellow gloves and other cleaning stuff and I have to be so careful to keep it in a safe place at all times.

The truth is I’m living this double life every week and it’s exhausting, although I keep trying to think of a cleaning job as being an alternative to a gym workout and that makes it feel better. It’s quite nice being humble because once you have decided that your low level status means you can’t disagree with or object to anything your client says, it’s easy just going with the flow, no matter how demanding they are. One lady I clean for works from home a lot and is always sharply telling me to be quicker or that I have missed something, but I tell myself this is a maid’s life and I’ve got to stick with it because it’s my wish and my destiny somehow. Also, strangely, being paid cash in hand in an amount which is only just above the minimum wage is somehow exciting because, first, it’s real money which is a bit of a thrill to receive because I can spend it (!) and, second, it’s demeaning compared with what I earn in my lawyer job, which is a bit of a thrill too because it reinforces the reality of the fact that I am in truth someone’s domestic cleaning lady.

Thank you for the response, katyn99.

I find all these very interesting and when I was reading, I noticed something.

Even if you remove any erotica from such a double life, being someone who is content with her real self (work, success, being an alpha etc.), this sort of simplicity, experiencing real humility (not in a sexual way) as many people are doomed to live in might be a good way to keep balance; both in someone's life and perception of things.

Also, it must be hard not to snap or bite back such 'ladies' who love to behave like that to their cleaning ladies or janitors etc.

I would, especially when I empathized the people who had no choice but take that sh.t to earn a few bucks.

I'd love to hear if one of them found you in court as the lawyer of the other side :)

Hello again kD. You’re raising some great points! It’s fun by the way to have a secret life: it adds an extra frisson of excitement to an intense day of lawyering to know that you’ll be on your knees cleaning the underside of someone else’s toilet seat in the evening, for pennies.

You get used to it by the way: when I started (years ago, when I was a student) I thought it would be gross to clean other women’s sh.t and p. stains, but it almost immediately becomes part of the job, it’s your duty as their cleaner to make it clean. Learning that was a big, and wonderful, discovery: I really enjoy making my clients’ toilets sparkling clean, picking up their pubic hairs with a wet cloth, untangling their crusty knickers from their tights, fishing empty tampon tubes out of their bed, wiping clean their sex toys and putting them back in their bedside cupboards — all that stuff I thought I would hate. The truth is that I may be a busy legal eagle during the day, but when not at the office I am a real cleaner, doing a real cleaner’s job, for real cleaner’s pay.

I learnt early on never to snap back or give anyone backchat: as a cleaner you can be dismissed at a moment’s notice, on the whim of the client; and this has happened to me several times. I have learned that even though many of these ladies spend more on lunch than I would earn in a cleaning session, they hate paying for cleaning if it takes any longer than they think it should; and if they think you’re taking too long and thus using up more money than they want to pay you, they dismiss you pretty quickly.

The worst thing is “unreliability,” which has caused clients to dismiss me more than once when day job pressures have meant that I was not able to attend in a single particular week (I had to use a different reason, obviously), even after being there regularly week after week otherwise. They’re generally not forgiving or sympathetic at all, they just dismiss you; it’s always upsetting too.

Luckily I’m not a courtroom lawyer — the idea of running into one of my cleaning clients in my legal capacity is just too terrible to even contemplate. In fact I am very careful to never accept a cleaning job from a lady who might have any connection with my usual professional and private life. Once I cleaned a couple of times for a female graduate student who I discovered was remotely but definitely connected with people I knew and I swiftly resigned and hoped she would quickly forget my face in case we ever met in the future!

Wow. Seems like a very hard but interesting double life.

Thanks for your responses, I loved this little conversation of ours.

See you in the comments sections of your other stories.