All Comments on 'Practice Makes Perfect'

good start. like how it has progressed.

wish I had an aunt like that

Many lads in Andrews situation would be very happy to have an Aunt like Maria to help them. Confidence is very important for small guy to have successful relationship.

I hope this is the first chapter in a series. Well written with good plot and character development. More please!

Many men need the guidance of a caring experienced woman during their early sexual exploration. Besides that, why waste money on artificial insemination?

You've got a great story here that has the potential to turn into a damn good multi-chapter novel. I did feel like it was a little rushed but only because I enjoy a longer more detailed build up to the climax, such as him finally losing his virginity. The training should've lasted longer, spending more time focusing on each aspect of sex, touching/fondling, giving/receiving oral, then finally intercourse. The final part, IMO, should've been more special for him. Maybe have the aunt dressed up, make it way more memorable. If you add on more chapters, it'd be fun to add in the husband for a MMF threesome or even a group event with the girlfriend that was mentioned in the end. Again, it was a great story and I'm sure I'm not the only one who would love to see this continued. Feel free to hmu if you want to. I'd love to throw some ideas your way and hear...err read what you have to say. BTW, BBWS...😍

Please dwell into more into the incest taboo stories....Wow! You are so gifted at it....

It was such an arousing read and this story tops some of my many other favorite authors submissions as well,SO I gues that proves that you are an up and coming great writer.... Thank you and hope there more stories on the way(preferably family related ones hehe)

It definitely had enough realism to keep me interested. The realistic nature of pre-mature ejaculation of a virgin was on point. If you have a follow-up, tell it from the perspective of the husband, having watched the video.

She was too much of a bitch for me. No love and not much lust. 2*

AuthorMommy,

Congratulations on the new addition to your own family. (Baby)

Also into this new genre of stories. You've done quite well here.

Laying the foundations for future chapters, with these and other characters.

Looking forward to more, whenever you're ready.

Thanks,

WB

Excellent read, excellent stroke material. Your story took me back to my youth & the relative who taught me about sex & making love to a woman. Thank you for taking me down memory lane!

Besides being only 1 chapter the story is well written

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