All Comments on 'Prayers On Fire'

your story is very well-written. your adjectives and descriptions of mundane (and not so mundane) things is something to be admired. the imagery is also top-notch, and i thouroughly enjoyed the building to the climax when the protagonist (insert spoiler here). the ending was kind of short and to-the-point, but it left me with questions where i was able to not exactly know what happened, which i always like. keep up the creepy writing, and i look forward to more from you.