by Wolf16again
If you're posting two stories on the same day, you obviously haven't spent enough time on either.
Since the story was primarily about some young guy playing music and fucking, why are you in the LW section? This was poorly thought out and badly written drivel.
1 star
Far to difficult to read so I quit and skimmed most of it.
RE:26thNC comment ;(Brother Brooks103x)
I think if you search sbrooks103x you'll find a good many stories. Have been enjoying your comments; Thanks! cd
Pretty much unreadable. Get an editor. Any editor. A child under 5 could make improvements.
For some reason all 14 of my comments mysteriously disappeared yesterday. I was asking , my pal, Mr. Brooks103x, which one of this author's efforts he considered a story. I know sbrooks103 is an accomplished author, as are you. Both in my favorites.
I'm not jody
The preacher never found out as far as I know
Oh, I kinda thought that was what jody was all about... :D rock out with yer cock out