by barry240646
The story became too complicated with rules and unnecessary activities. Plus, it isn't a husband swap to put Adam and Joe in the same sleeping bag.
The coffee meetings and mysterious dinner were fine in the first chapter to break the ice and introduce the two neighboring couples. Instead of adding a 3rd couple, chapter 2 could and should have been a simple swap with Jo and Eve trading husbands for an entire night. That could have been written as an explicit and steamy evening. Having Ana blatantly push her way into Jo and Eve's morning ritual did not work. It seemed forced with no purpose but to add an Hispanic couple.
enjoyed this little sex romp,, BUT it got cumbersome with all the rules,,,and the meals lolool,,if i ate all that heavy food i would want a nap not sex!!