All Comments on 'Preggo Needs Ch. 01: Lost Control'

Good brother taking care of his sister.

I would have liked for Eldon to come home and eat the sexy brother cum from her used pregnant pussy, knowing whose it was, wishing he had watched it, and all while planning to watch it happen the next time and eat the cum while it is fresh. Next chapter please!

OK premise.

But sex is seriously rushed.

Needed teasing/foreplay.

Needed her telling jom what she wanted him to do.

Three stars.

You need to write another chapter. 5 stars.