by MohanSingh
A solid read. I enjoyed the build up as the two danced around each other for a bit before finally committing.
My only criticism (constructively given) is that the sentence structure could be a bit more varied; there were too many sentences one after the other that started with “I.”
Obviously (other) Anon has never had a pregnant partner.
Well described episode of a hormonal pregnant woman. Evokes a memory or two.
Good build up to the deed being done. I would have liked a little more explicit description of the sights sounds smells and taste of their couplings. But still an enjoyable read
These people are dumber than stumps. What's sexy or erotic about that nonsense?
1 star
The build up to the final sex was amazing. It was a brilliant piece. 5 stars.
"Hot" anony didn't have sex with a pregnant woman either or he would have realized that women do not get their breast milk in until after the baby is born. That and pounding a woman late in pregnancy can cause cervical bleeding or placenta pulling away from the uterus wall. Not good for baby.
...her husband? He did not care about his baby?
What about her family? Her father did not look for her? - *
There was no need to stretch this story to 3 pages; that made it unrealistic and killed the interest.
Thank you for replying. Inkhorn I will take on board what you said.
This story could have been a lot shorter. It got boring. But nice effort. Three stars.
Average. Could have been better if either her hubby or friends hubby were also fucking her
101k views and still counting. Love for everyone that has read and jerked off to this story.
I can't believe that 23 years onto the 31st century, people STILL write about arranged marriages. How 18th century.