All Comments on 'Pregnant Milky Milf'

by MohanSingh

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InkhornInkhornover 4 years ago
Engaging!

A solid read. I enjoyed the build up as the two danced around each other for a bit before finally committing.

My only criticism (constructively given) is that the sentence structure could be a bit more varied; there were too many sentences one after the other that started with “I.”

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very erotic

Well done. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot

Obviously (other) Anon has never had a pregnant partner.

Well described episode of a hormonal pregnant woman. Evokes a memory or two.

i122i122over 4 years ago
Enjoyable Read

Good build up to the deed being done. I would have liked a little more explicit description of the sights sounds smells and taste of their couplings. But still an enjoyable read

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another author that hates his characters

These people are dumber than stumps. What's sexy or erotic about that nonsense?

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Magnificent Build Up

The build up to the final sex was amazing. It was a brilliant piece. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Tales from the unwashed.

Who cares.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Obviously

"Hot" anony didn't have sex with a pregnant woman either or he would have realized that women do not get their breast milk in until after the baby is born. That and pounding a woman late in pregnancy can cause cervical bleeding or placenta pulling away from the uterus wall. Not good for baby.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So...what happened with.....

...her husband? He did not care about his baby?

What about her family? Her father did not look for her? - *

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too stretched

There was no need to stretch this story to 3 pages; that made it unrealistic and killed the interest.

MohanSinghMohanSinghover 4 years agoAuthor
Appreciate the feedback

Thank you for replying. Inkhorn I will take on board what you said.

ShaneinTXShaneinTXover 4 years ago
Great story!

I loved it. I think Indian women are the sexiest in the world!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Agree with “Too stretched”

This story could have been a lot shorter. It got boring. But nice effort. Three stars.

pinkykumarpinkykumarover 3 years ago

Average. Could have been better if either her hubby or friends hubby were also fucking her

MohanSinghMohanSinghover 2 years agoAuthor

101k views and still counting. Love for everyone that has read and jerked off to this story.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeff10 months ago

I can't believe that 23 years onto the 31st century, people STILL write about arranged marriages. How 18th century.

MohanSinghMohanSingh10 months agoAuthor

Calm down Jeff

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