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Click here"Ugh Ugh, Har..der..." Heather pleaded as she felt her orgasm build bigger then before.
Jake pushed further and faster with each thrust they could hear her juices splash against his cock, and his balls hitting her clit each time doubling the pleasure for Heather.
"Mhmm, I'm gonna cum" Jake announced has he started pounding her pussy furiously, grabbing her tits he squeezed both of them pulling them towards him burying his cock deep inside as he cummed sending strings of cum straight into her already full womb.
Heather laid there feeling her pussy contract around his cock, her ass squeeze, her tits run with electricity and eyes rolling this was by far the most powerful orgasm she's had in years, She pushed her legs out and laid there for a few minutes catching her breath recovering with Jake's cock coming out with an Audible 'POP' followed by a stream of juices a mix of his and hers.
Jake also laid down on the bed catching his breath after that amazing orgasm, after a few minutes they both got up and looked at the mess they created...
"You know I'm going to be needing more help as this progresses" Heather said looking down at her bump, with that same small giggle towards the end
Jake smiled and replied, "I'm happy to help at any time"
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Once again thanks for reading, this is my first public story please leave some comments I can only make it better after feedback from you guys!
There may be a part 2 but i felt this was enough for one story especially my first.
- PussyStorm
- COMMENTS
PussyStormalmost 4 years agoAuthorThanks for all the feedback, will spend more time on punctuation and grammar next time and hopefully look for an editor.
Thanks !
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoAn editor will help, but they may make changes that change your intent. It's better to put it away for a couple of days then read it out loud. I catch my mistakes that way, then send it to an editor. Good luck and keep writing!
Drawn_Drewalmost 4 years agoAgree with the other comments; your story is good overall, but I’d advise enlisting the help of an editor to correct any punctuation, spelling errors and assist with the overall layout of the text. Keep up the good work..
wmbf2013almost 4 years agoThe story was good, but there were a lot of run on sentences, missing punctuation, and grammatical errors. Fix those and the story would be much better and easier to read.
