All Comments on 'Premonitions: Senior Year Ch. 08'

In the hot tub, Devin was with Jessica, not Jackie. You wrote Jessica a half dozen times when you meant to write Jackie. Otherwise, I liked it. Nice surprise at the end, and making reward night another chapter altogether was a good idea.

Thank you Teacher44, too many J names :) I have submitted an updated version, which should be available in a few days.

Thank you for sharing a bit of your mind with us. 5 stars as usual Great story so far. Looking forward to the next installment.

The best story this year I've ever found, at least for me. I've been attached to it, and it'll be the best story in years for me if you will develop Scott and Jackie into a romantic relationship bit by bit, whether it'll be harsh end to Devin (like she disappointed cause he only thinks of her as his "thing" or whatever incident you have in your mind to split them) nor he got another "bad" girl to replace her. Needless to say, I am very shipping Scott x Jackie.