All Comments on 'Premonitions: Senior Year Ch. 13'

Quite the entertaining storyline, with loads of erotic sex scenes! Alas it tends to read like a young lads sex journal. I would’ve enjoyed more dialogue and a lot more character descriptions throughout the 13 chapters, to properly envision what each character looks like, as the entertaining chronicle unfolds. Cheers to the author for the fun read otherwise!

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I saw in your bio that you posted last year, about being around still.

I would love to see more of this series

Overall, I liked the story even with its utter inconsitancies. I mean your main lead is a total Ass clowen. He goes on and on about oh I didnt want to use my powers on her because she was my longest friend bla bla then fucks her and leaves her tied up to be ravaged by the rest of the highschool. Yeah thats what a friend does to someone he has held a candle for years....