All Comments on 'Pretend'

Absolutely love this! A great mix of teasing and tantalising description while leaving plenty to the imagination. This is less a story of sex and more the story of a sexual relationship and I love it for that! Can't wait for what comes next.

Wonderful story Lemon! I love the way she yearns for this guy. Feels very, very big and very uncontrollable, passionate... Ten

It's always fun to read a good hookup story with so much under it, that doesn't need every letter spelled out in order to make it fabulous.