All Comments on 'Pretty Party Ch. 01'

giving your characters oversized tits and/or dickeys

"Interactive" is code for, "I don't have an imagination. Please send me some ideas so I can continue to shovel out this drivel." Obviously, this "writer" is deficient in imagination, as well as technical skills.

Goddman funniest Line I have ever read here

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I was nearly panting as I said, "Yes, my love beast!

Give up writing, you haven't got a clue of writing an acceptable story. Your sick warped mind will not cut it. Please go play in the traffic.

administrative assistant. So her sex party was truly one of an adulteress cheating on her husband, or at least it was intentional cheating in her mind on her noncheating spouse. So now we know she is and intentional cheating slut. Then she gets in over her head and gets blackmailed. We can see if STDS or AIDS doesnt get them first this marriage, whose contract has been broken by both parties, is soon to be toast. A slut will always be a slut and a cheater will always be a cheater. And they are both both of those. Why have a chapter 1, you already ruined their marriage. RB

Just a group of nasty soulless cheaters. No one to.like anywhere in this story.