All Comments on 'Priceless Investment'

Great story would love to see part 2

A lovely story that was spoiled by quite careless spelling errors. Slow down! Better still write in longhand before transcribing onto your computer. A well thought out continuation would be most welcome.

Great story. At the risk of sounding too picky, I had trouble shifting gears from 1st person to 3rd person and back. Maybe put the 3rd person in italics for future stories?

Very enjoyable story!

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Thank you for your comments. I am still learning. And each of you have given me a lot to think about and to learn from.

A great read, really enjoyed it all the way. Would love to see a part two, with lactation, breastfeeding and milking.

I don't know if a man like this exists.. if he does, then I suppose he is the man of every girl's dream.. he is definitely the man of my dreams.. he is the full package.. loving, caring, kind, and the way he admires and loves every little bit of Nicole.. that is just so amazing.. his actions, his reactions, his understanding of what erotic lactation/anr is on point.. the way he pleasures her.. the way he even wants to be with her all the time.. that crazy kind of love.. even that dedication.. it's unreal.