by edinbedin
Nothing ruins these stories than humiliation. I have seen none so far and hope the rest of the story maintains this theme. Some stories are at the cusp of good to bead by where the writer takes them. Choose wisely.
With the exhibitionism/voyeur aspect of this story, I might suggest you move the next chapter to the Exhibitionist Voyeur page. The readership there is more civil than LW. And you will find that your scoring will be better. Good luck.
Great story, the ending was far too rushed. Or? Are you considering a part 2?
reminded me of a time long ago when my husband let another man touch me. Loved it......
Much more erotic than any other story today. Very seductive. Well done! I rarely award 5 stars but you earned them. I look forward to reading more from you.
Oh to get the Mrs. to let loose with a young man so much fun. That’s what fantasy island.
Very hot story!!! Congrats for your first one here in Literotica!!! Any option for a second round? ;)
Good story! Reminded me of a few times my wife and I had while stationed in Germany back in the 70's Exciting memories!
Very hot!! Don't worry about the negitive crap others post. Some people think that because they are not into wife sharing, it's wrong for anybody else be into it. It's just a world full simple minded people who nobody listens to, so they come here to try to make a point. Good story. Ingore them and keep writing what YOU LIKE.
If this story was based on reality the it is a phantasy that many men share. I've often wondered how my wife would react if I encouraged another man to act on his desires with her and this sounds like the results I would accept. Now we have to wonder if Richard will visit Jim and Tricia again and if Richard's hard cock would entice Tricia to do more that pose for a few photo shots.
Very hot! Sometimes you just have to set the mood and see what happens.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
My wife has posed for a group of my friends who were into photography. It started off in a sexy dress, then in a bikini and ended in lingerie. The next time she agreed and each man brought over an outfit they wanter her to wear and agreed she could keep them. Of course it ended up being six sets of lingerie. Everything from a see through babydoll nighties, to bra and panty sets to a very sexy leather basque and leather boots.
A wonderful start to this sexy series! Love how the intimacy unfolds naturally. When the desire is there, friends can become lovers fairly quickly.
LOVED IT. LOVED IT. LOVED IT.
5.0 = 100% = A++ (♡♡♡♡♡+)!
Tishy is a keeper. End of story. Full stop.
Very stimulating. Very well written. Big tits in an open blouse is very erotic. Other authors would have had her sucking his dick half way through. Glad you resisted. Looking forward to ch 2. 5 stars
This is very nice, my favourite in this series. It's so understated. I often think about how my husband would feel about me doing something like this.