All Comments on 'Princess To Be Ch. 01'

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ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 8 years ago
in exactly what universe...

...is "come on me" SHORT for "meme"??

The first is longer than the second in words, syllables and letters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I encourage you to keep writing.

Your use of "pov" leads me to believe you have recently graduated from wattpad. You've got monologue and dialogue covered, but you need to work on your world building. Without a description of the setting, first person comes across as dry and drab. I hope you make use of the forums and the wonderful editing volunteers that are available. Keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not, "come on me"

It was obvious that this person only meant "Me" was short for Meme. Do you not understand English well? Or did you want to come across as stupid?

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