by MicheleNylons
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. So damn good...until the very end. What can I say, I'm always the optimist. Amazing writing, as usual.
Of course, Bobbie isn't dead, but the ex wife, lover and daughter should be. He started the whole thing to protect them, even money was funneled to them. No matter what decisions Robert made in the long run, the situation that got him targeted was from his wife's betrayal. She was not only a shitty wife, she was no longer a good blackmail target to keep him alive.
Oh, what a shock, how sad, how cruel but, I suppose, at least it was quick
Love your writing
OMG! That ending was JARRING! Loving this story! Hope there's much more to come!
really well written, very erotic. skillfully weaves together the various nuances and themes of male/female sexuality. the ending hits hard yet supports the underlying darkness of the story. liked it'
OMG i can't believe it. I'm hoping it is a fake assassination and that Bobbie will work with Allie....Loved the story, and maybe another chapter will follow?
Your writing again is incredible…and the ending….but is it really the end???