by shimmer752
This was one of the best submissions I've read on here. Maybe it's because it's more personal for me, as I am waiting (and have been for the past 9 years) for my other half to be released from prison. It actually gave me chills reading this!! :)
Really enjoyed the story, but felt it was incomplete. A little more background on Chris (like how he ended up in prison -- I kept feeling nervous for Jane, not knowing more about his history) and some time spent on their relationship AFTER the first sexual experience would have put it in the "100" category for me. Still, a good read.