All Comments on 'Prisoner 4053 Ch. 03'

Love this story so far!!!

I am totally hooked on your story! Love the perspective and am looking forward to how everything will evolve...

Whatever happened to her to earn this punishment, it clearly isn't proportionate to the sentence. That said it's a heck of a lot better a read than the oh so common 'she's violated and instantly loves it' stories.

It's also good to see it in the proper category.

Great story and well written but your episodes are too short which leaves them less satisfying and developed than they could be. I hope you'll write lots more and experiment a little with longer chapters.