All Comments on 'Prissy Krissy Pt. 02'

Again, great build up and progression. The tension is palpable and erotic. I remain cautiously hopeful that it doesn't all end in tears.

I agree with shadracht's critique. I look forward to where you will take your tale! Cheers!

I really like the way this story is developing. Looking forward to reading more.

If you were a new author, I'd be jumping ship on the story right now. It's quality writing, but the chunks of the story are too bite-sized to feel like I'm getting nourished. However, I know you're an excellent writer and so I'll sign up for another snack. I hope I don't starve before the next installment. As a writer myself, I'd have waited until I had a more substantial meal ready to serve before I published.

Really like the story telling on this.. looking forward to the next segment.

It's possible that I'm giving too much credit, but I am noticing the same sort of slow progression that **we** the reader are forced to have, which mirrors that Jacob (the MMC) has to take things much slower than he wants in order to hopefully get where he wants to go. Again, maybe it's just coincidence, but it's also possible that this is an experiment to lead the reader in the same emotional state as the narrator.

Wait until they watch Wild Things

This is masterful build-up through two chapters. Nice work.

I'm assuming at this point that you probably finished writing the entire series before submitting the first installment for publication. I'm enjoying it so far, but at this point I'm probably going to walk away from it for 3 or four weeks. There was another story that I read once before that was about 20 chapters of single page installments like this that I enjoyed, but it was tedious to read it like that with such short chapters. I'll make a note to check back later. 4/5

This story takes me back to the 90's. Great times.

This is great work. Really good build up so far. I kinda understand people wanting it to come out faster but 3 sections all in a week isn’t bad at all, we could be without anything. Looking forward to more! All your work is quality

Enjoyed this part. Takes me back enough that I remember walking the isles in blockbuster. Mentioning the soft fuzz on her arms was a great detail that fleshed Krissy out.

Nice story

This is more lighthearted and funnier than most of your other work. I love the change of tone. Also I hope it stays this way, you just never know how things will turn.

Awwww, at this point, I'm invested to see if this girl can grow and be happy instead of the (very hot) sex scenes.

Poor thing needs a good friend, it seems